Tuesday, December 12, 2017

28 Boring Words and What to Use Instead - Infographic

Today, I'm featuring freelance writer and blogger Jack Milgram, whose infographic on boring words and how to avoid them or alternatives to use instead is a great and quick resource to enhance your writing.

Whether you're writing a blog post, a short story, or a full-length novel, you'll enjoy this quick and easy-to-read inforgraphic.

How do you replace words like "nice" "happy" "sad"?

Find out below. 

28 Boring Words Alternatives - Improve Your Writing Infographic by Jack Milgram

Feel free to get in touch with Jack Milgram via Twitter or Facebook, or you can comment on the blog post itself. 

Sunday, December 10, 2017

Magora: The Uprising by Marc Remus – Book Review

Book: Magora: The Uprising
(Book 4 in the Magora Series)
Author: Marc Remus
Genres: Children's, Middle Grade, Fantasy, Art, Adventure

"Run, Holly. He's going to kill you!"

Magora: The Uprising is the fourth instalment in Marc Remus fantasy-art world Magora series.

Magora is a world that four children travel to through a painting. The main character Holly is accompanied by her three friends: Rufus, Amanda, and Brian.

The book begins right in the middle of a calamity. The Smoralls who adopted Holly several years prior are in a row and Ms. Smorall, who has always hated and mistreated Holly is begging the little girl to run.

Prior to this event, Holly had thought the Smoralls were ordinary people. But in Magora: The Uprising many secrets are revealed and many more questions arise.

"Why did all of this have to happen? Why did Grandpa Nikolas build a world that would fall apart?"

Suspenseful, the book barely allows the reader a quick breath before new events and troubles occur.

As the books progress, we see each of the characters develop in their own way. In the fourth book in the series, Holly has several hurdles and responsibilities thrown at her and she handles quite well. We see her, even at the age of 14, grow wiser and smarter. She is also creative, thoughtful, and kind.

When we last left Holly in book three, things were a mess in Magora, with the Unfinished increasing in numbers and attacking the island.

The Unfinished are incomplete people or animals that need blood in order to be completed. Otherwise, they would suck a person in front of them dry just to reach completion.

Unfinished painting by Keith Haring

In Magora: The Uprising, the Unfinished have multiplied in numbers, destroying places and are raging to kill people in order to be finished. We also learn that they are controlled by the Duke of Cuspidor, an illusive villain who has been trying to trap – and may be murder – Holly since book one.

One of the things I liked in the fourth book was the new side to Amanda that Remus gives his readers. In first book, I felt that Amanda was a love-hate kind of character, more hate and less love, because she was rude and haughty. But in Magora: The Uprising, we learn more about her and her family and why she acts the way she does. There is an embedded social comment in there.

"I thought that by bullying people, I could make them do what I want, and they'd be nice to me."

In book four, we also learn more about the Woodspeople, a species of people who came to Magora at some point but are believed to be extinct. (Book 5 is called Magora: The Woodspeople)

Holly by Marc Remus

I liked Remus' take on bookworms, which in Magora are real worms.
"Bookworms react to people. They were bred to sense if the book can help a person or not."

Overall, Magora: The Uprising is a must-read; I'd recommend you at least start at book two – although starting the series from book one would allow you to connect things better.

It's fast-paced, suspenseful, exciting, and most importantly magical with lots of creativity from both the characters and the author.

"I've finally found a home," said Amanda. "Magora is my home."

Check out my book reviews for the previous book in the Magora series.

Magora: The Gallery of Wonders
(Book 1)

Magora: The Golden Maple Tree (Book 2)
Magora: The Bridge in the Fog (book 3)

About the Author:
Marc Remus has been a full-time painter for 20 years, which has prompted him to come up with Magora.
"I always wondered what it would be like to fall into one of my paintings," he says. "I have also painted the covers for all the Magora books, designed the logo, and did the interior layout."
You can check out his artwork at his websiteYou can also connect with Marc via FacebookTwitter and check out his TV documentary.

Magora: The Gallery of Wonders is currently under translation to both German and Spanish.

Friday, December 8, 2017

Who’s a NaNoWriMo Winner? ME!

In November 2017, I challenged myself to write 50,000 words over 30 days.

What is this crazy-number challenge? It’s NaNoWriMo, which stands for National Nove Writing Month. Every November, authors from across the globe challenge themselves to completing a draft or book by writing 50,000 words over a 30-day period. This means around 1,667 words per day, which is not an easy task.

Last time I took part in NaNoWriMo was in 2013 and I only wrote around 3,500 words (give or take a few). Since then, Novembers came and passed and I didn’t take part in the challenge.

But in 2017, I decided I’d take the challenge and had an idea for a story that had been playing in my head for some time. What I call DeeDee’s story.

A mug and its matching coaster I bought in November. I loved drinking from it
while I was working on my NaNoWriMo novel 

On the first day, I passed the required daily count by 100 words. I was thrilled. The second day, let’s just say life got in the way, then the third. On the fourth, I made slow progress. A few days into the second week, I was over 10,000 words behind schedule!

I thought I’d settle for 30,000 words instead of 50,000 but then decided I would do my best to reach the original target. I had another 14 days to prove myself to ME!

Then, I took one day off work, glued my butt to the chair and started writing.

That day, I ended up with a little over 6,000 words! Can you believe that? 6,000 words in a single day! That was equivalent to what I had been doing for the past three months, the full months! I wanted to jump up and down in my room (but didn't in case any family members came in and thought I'd completely lost it!)

Also bought this in November.
Perfect for mystery writers, right?

Still, despite my leap in progress I was not on track - yet. So the hard work had to go on.

When I started the month, I just had some vague idea about certain parts of the novel along with some characters. So, I started writing, but as I progressed I realised that unlike my other writing project this one required an outline.

So, I sat down, picked out the full cast of my characters, and made an initial outline of at least the first three or four chapters along with some main events that I needed to cover. As the novel and I progressed, the events were allocated certain chapters, while other events just popped out in the middle, like romance knocking on DeeDee’s door and other characters looking to appear a second time and so on.

After much hard work, most – if not all – my gym workouts sacrificed and another day taken off from work. I was done. I closed the case and the mystery on the 28th. On the 29th of November, I made some more tweaking, added an actual concluding chapter and was done with 53,166 words!

That's 3,000 words over the target and one day ahead of schedule!

I couldn't believe it!

To corroborate my success, NaNoWriMo lets you put the full text – for confirmation – on their website. That done. I was given a CONGRATULATIONS! WINNER! And this lovely badge!

I have learnt a lot of things by doing NaNoWriMo this year. I know a few of things below are a bit obvious but sometimes you just need to prove to yourself that you can.

So what did NaNoWriMo 2017 teach me?

1)    That I can do it.
2)    That I had not been 100% serious the previous months when I had a 10,000-word target but barely managed 6,000 and once 8,000.
3)    I need to organise my time better.
4)    (A continuation of no. 3) I need to be able to work out, read, and write all in a month.

Throughout November, I was unable to continue reading the books I had started, or pick up new ones. I thought I'd be able to read or finish at least one book.

But I must say, it was all worth it. The sleepless time, the outlines and crossing-outs done (yes, I typed the novel but the outlines and basic ideas were handwritten), the abandoned workouts. DeeDee's story has been born.

The characters speaking in my head at all times of the day was probably the hardest part but it was a great experience.

And you know what?


Learn more about the differences between a tradition mystery and cozy mystery in this exclusive guest post by author Kirsten Weiss. It was a great reference for me both in learning and while writing.

Check out Nadaness In Motion's cozy mystery book reviews to learn more about the genre and meet some amazing books and authors.

There are a few authors who have unknowingly and indirectly helped me but don't know it. Here are two of them: Devorah Fox and Kirsten Weiss. Every cozy mystery author I've read has helped me one way or another. 

Special thanks to Marc Remus for his help with my second main character, Alexander, the painter.

And of course several close friends, who know who they are.

Oh! Have you seen my shiny certificate? 
(I don't have a novel title yet so DeeDee's paranormal cozy mystery will just have to do!)

Wednesday, December 6, 2017

Take the bait - Poem

Take the bait
Feel the weight
You think I'm the prey
Think again
I believe you've lost your way
Hold on tight
I'll drag you to the depths
Where it will be alright
(For me!)

By: Nada Adel Sobhi

This poem was inspired, a spur of the moment, by the above image posted by Realistic Poetry via Twitter.

Thursday, November 30, 2017

Takhayyal writing prompt 76: The Last Battle

Welcome back Ladies and Gentlemen, Artists, Poets, Writers, Authors, Dreamers, Friends and Family; Welcome EVERYONE to Nadaness In Motion's bi-weekly picture-prompt writing challenge Takhayyal.

The last prompt for November, a long and tough month, especially after I took on the NaNoWriMo challenge, which stands for National Novel Writing Month, and entails writing 50,000 words in 30 days! Today marks the last day of the challenge and I'll be posting my writing journal and updates.

As NaNoWriMo ends, it's time for…. DRAGONS!

I have a special place in my heart for these creatures, not sure how that will work with the newest prompt though. So let's get writing!

Image found online. Artist unknown. If you know who the artist is please let me know.

Arabic for Imagine, Takhayyal is a challenge for writers of all ages and genres; a place to spark creativity and explore new genres.
Your post can be in English or Arabic, prose, poetry, short story, flash fiction; you name it and write it.

General rules:
·        No nudity, violence, and/or abuse.
·        Leave the link to your post in comments below OR post your piece as REPLY to this post
·        Your piece MUST be inspired in some way or other by the above picture
·        Multiple entries allowed
·        It is not required but it is a nice and encouraging gesture to comment on others' pieces.
·        Feel free to add your Twitter handle (@....) so I can tag you in my tweets!


Wednesday, November 29, 2017

Hummus and Homicide by Tina Kashian - Cover Reveal

When Lucy Berberian quits her Philadelphia law firm and heads home to Ocean Crest, she knows what she’s getting—the scent of funnel cake, the sight of the wooden roller coaster, and the tastes of her family’s Mediterranean restaurant. But murder wasn’t on the menu . . .

Things are slow in the off-season in this Jersey Shore town, but Lucy doesn’t mind. She doesn’t even mind waitressing at the Kebab Kitchen. Her parents have put in a new hummus bar, with every flavor from lemon to roasted red pepper. It’s fun to see their calico cat again, and to catch up with her old BFF, who’s married to a cop now.
She could do without Heather Banks, though. The Gucci-toting ex-cheerleader is still as nasty as she was back in high school . . . and unfortunately, she’s just taken over as the local health inspector. Just minutes after eating at the Kebab Kitchen—where she’s tallied up a whole list of bogus violations—she falls down dead in the street. Word on the grapevine is it’s homicide, and Lucy’s the number one suspect . . .
Recipes included!




Coming February 27, 2018 from Kensington Books!!

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Sunday, November 26, 2017

Uncage Me - Poem

She hides
She hides
From the intensity of the light
She cries
She cries
From the horrors of the night
I see her
Blocking her ears,
Pulling her hair,
Screaming at her fears,
Sitting with frozen feet bare.

I call out her name
But she is barely there
Fading right before me,
Disappearing from light to air.

"Uncage me!"
She once told me.

But how do you break someone free
From the prison they fashioned for themselves
And threw away its key?

"I'm coming!
I'm coming!"
I shout.

But behind the barrier
That is her prison
My words are weightless
Incapable of breaking her high walls

"I'm coming!
I'm coming!"

But within her mind, she hides,
In the darkness, she cries
And I am left to toil
To set her free
From the cage of her mind
One she has so well enclosed herself in

"Uncage Me!"
The words linger in my mind

But how do you break someone free
From the prison they fashioned for themselves
And threw away its key?

By: Nada Adel Sobhi

Written Sunday, 26 November 2017 at 5:00 am

The above poem was inspired by the image, which is the 75th picture prompt in the Takhayyal/Imagine writing prompt series. Post your own poem/piece inspired by the image here.

Sunday, November 19, 2017

Death at the Emerald, historical mystery by R. J. Koreto - Guest Post

Death at the Emerald: A Frances Ffolkes Mystery
Author: R. J. Koreto
Genres: Historical Fiction, Cozy Mystery
3rd in Series
Publisher: Crooked Lane Books
Publication date: 7 November 2017
Hardcover: 272 pages
ISBN-13: 978-1683313373/EBook ASIN: B06XWF3K5Z

One-named stunning actress Helen mysteriously vanished 30 years ago. An elderly family friend is unable to bear not knowing any longer and commissions Lady Frances Ffolkes to track her down. Taking on the role of Lady Sherlock, with her loyal maid Mallow drafted as her Watson, Frances finds herself immersed in the glamorous world of Edwardian theater and London’s latest craze—motion pictures.

As Frances and Mallow make their way through the theaters, they meet colorful figures such as George Bernard Shaw and King Edward II. Tracking the theaters seems like a dead end. That is until one of Helen’s old suitors is suddenly murdered. With the stakes raised, Frances and Mallow work quickly to uncover a box of subtle clues to Helen’s whereabouts. But someone unexpected wants that box just as badly and is willing to kill to keep it shut.

The stage is set for murder and Frances and Mallow are determined to unravel the decades-old conspiracy in Death at the Emerald, R. J. Koreto’s third installment in the captivating Lady Frances Ffolkes mysteries.

Character Guest Post by R. J. Koreto

I am Lady Frances Ffolkes, whose adventures in turn-of-the-century London have been recounted in three books written by R.J. Koreto. As this is a blog devoted to books, I thought it would be a good idea to present an annotated collection of some of my favorite books.

1.     Middlemarch, by George Eliot. With more than 300,000 words, it's not everyone's cup of tea. But the richness of the characters and Eliot's uncanny insights into the human condition make every one of those words worth it. It's a pity Eliot had to publish under a man's pen name to be taken seriously.

2.     The Hound of the Baskervilles, by Arthur Conan Doyle. I count Sir Arthur as one of my friends, and we once spent a most entertaining afternoon discussing different ways to poison people. I suggested to my invaluable maid and assistant June Mallow that she may want to read some Sherlock Holmes stories. She said she was happy to help me solve murders, but didn't want to read about murders in her spare time. I sympathize.

3.     A Christmas Carol, by Charles Dickens. Few authors are more entertaining to read out loud than Dickens. Last Christmas, I read it out loud to Mallow. She knew the poverty Dickens describes more than I ever could, and was deeply moved. I confess we both cried at the end when Scrooge was converted and Tiny Tim lived.

4.     Huckleberry Finn, by Mark Twain. It was my great privilege to be born in London, the most civilized city in the world. So I think of the last lines a lot: "But I reckon I got to light out for the Territory ahead of the rest, because Aunt Sally she’s going to adopt me and sivilize me and I can’t stand it. I been there before." I did get to meet Mr. Twain (actually, Mr. Clemens) briefly while I was in America and enjoyed discussing the book with him. My fiancé, Hal Wheaton, says this is his favorite novel. Young Finn has a point: It might be fun to not be civilized.

5.     Pride and Prejudice, by Jane Austen. There's no question that women have insights into characters men don't. This was another book I read out loud to Mallow. She never did warm to Mr. Darcy and said he wasn't very pleasant, which is no doubt true. She said if she had her choice, she'd rather marry Mr. Bingley, and I'm not sure she's wrong. I told Mallow that Hal was like Mr. Bingley, only intelligent, and she said, "I'm sure you're right, my lady."

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About The Author

R.J. Koreto is the author of the Lady Frances Ffolkes mystery series, set in Edwardian England, and the Alice Roosevelt mystery series, set in turn-of-the-century New York. His short stories have been published in Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine and Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine.
In his day job, he works as a business and financial journalist. Over the years, he’s been a magazine writer and editor, website manager, PR consultant, book author, and seaman in the U.S. Merchant Marine. Like his heroine, Lady Frances Ffolkes, he’s a graduate of Vassar College.
With his wife and daughters, he divides his time between Rockland County, N.Y., and Martha’s Vineyard, Mass.

Connect with R. J. Koreto via his Website (includes a sign-up form for his weekly newsletter), Facebook, Goodreads, and Twitter.

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